The layout of my magazine has changed and improved a lot since the preliminary task. The positioning of the photograph isn't very good on my college magazine and it hasn't been edited in any way and doesn't look professional at all. Also the cover lines are all at the bottom in the same font and look really plain. The whole magazine looks boring and unattractive to the audience. However my music magazine is a lot better with the main photo positioned nicely in the middle and big so it stands out, with other images around it and story lines to go with some of the images. I have used boxes to make the cover lines stand out and it definitely looks a lot more professional.
The photograph on my college magazine isn't very good quality compared to my music magazine because the college photo was taken on a phone and the images on my music magazine were taken with an SLR Camera. Also for the college magazine i haven't considered the lighting or props or location where as with the music magazine I feel the lighting is a lot better with better props and the locations were different and I actually thought about them. I also feel my music magazine portrays my genre of pop.
The colours I have used on both magazines are bright and stand out, however I feel the colours used on my music magazine compliment each other more. I have learnt to use different sizes of text to show a variation and to make the more important bits stand out more than the rest, this will attract the target audience more and catch their eye. Also I learnt to use different fonts aswell but to make sure they fit in with the genre.
The layout for my music magazine is much better than my college magazine as i have thought more about it and the positioning is a lot better as in the preliminary task I put the contents stories down one side with pictures on the other with the title at the top and a lot of blank space. Whereas my music magazine uses the space more and makes it look busy but not too much that you can't read or understand parts. The text is spread out all over the page and split into different sections making it easier to find what you're looking for.
The font used on my college magazine is simple and doesn't stand out whereas on my music magazine I have made it suit the genre and stand out more so it doesn't look too boring. I have also made the title at the top bigger to help it stand out.
The photographs on my preliminary task aren't a great quality as they were taken using a camera on a phone, However they have been taken around the college so the mise en scene fits with the magazine nicely but the lighting isn't that great in the images.













